Week 5 Storytelling: Hanuman’s Birth
“Ravi, come home it’s time for bed!” Nihal yelled from the window of his home in the rainforest canopy.
A meek voice replied, “Dad, let me play with my friends a bit longer!”
“Don’t you want to grow big and strong like Hanuman? To that you must sleep.” Nihal shouted back.
No sooner had those words come out of Nihal’s mouth than Ravi came swinging through the trees headed straight for their home. His face was visibly excited at the mention of Hanuman, and he quickly readied himself for bed.
“Will you come tuck me in and tell me a story about Hanuman dad?” Ravi asked.
“Of course son,” Nihal said as he began tucking Ravi tightly under the covers, “I want to tell you about Hanuman’s youth. He used to be a little monkey just like you Ravi.”
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| Hanuman as a child |
Ravi’s eyes lit up at the thought of Hanuman being the same as him. He sat in anticipation as Nihal began to tell the story of Hanuman’s origin.
“Ravi, do you know the wind you feel that cools you off on a hot day? That wind is the god Vayu. Vayu is Hanuman’s father, and his mother is the most beautiful monkey woman on all of earth Anjana. Anjana was already married, so she had to keep Hanuman a secret so she left him alone in a cave. All alone in the cave Hanuman began to grow hungry and started looking for something to eat. He gazed into the sky and saw a beautiful orange shape. ‘It must be a mango’ Hanuman thought, so he jumped towards it.”
“Daddy no, it’s the sun not a mango! Hanuman can’t get hurt!” Ravi exclaimed
“Don’t worry son he’ll be safe,” Nihal continued, “Vayu his father cooled Hanuman to keep him from getting burned up as he approached the sun! The Asura Rahu was approaching the sun to eat it causing a solar eclipse, and Hanuman accidently kicked him in the eye. Rahu fled to Indra, complaining that another Rahu was attempting to swallow the sun, so Indra got aboard his elephant Airavata and came to investigate. As Rahu approached Hanuman saw his large round form and once more attacked Rahu this time thinking he was a mango! Rahu yelled in pain and Indra shouted ‘Stop this at once!’ The noise of Indra’s shout diverted Hanuman’s attention and he caught sight of Airivata. ‘The biggest mango of all!’ thought Hanuman as he lept towards Airivata.
Ravi was laughing hysterically at the thought of Hanuman trying to eat so many things because he thought they were mangos. “Daddy, Hanuman is so silly,” Ravi said holding back his laughter. “What happens next? Indra doesn’t hurt Hanuman does he?”
Nihal chuckled at his sons amusement and continued the story, “Indra cast Hanuman down to earth with great force. Hanuman was hurt badly in the fall, and his father Vayu saw it all take place. The wind left the earth as Vayu went to the aid of his son Hanuman. The entire earth was without wind. Men grew restless, and climates changed in unnatural ways. The earth was out of balance with out Vayu flowing through the lands. Brahma came pleading for him to return to earth, and as a sign of goodwill he granted Hanuman invincibility. Still Vayu was not pleased. Something was still wrong with Hanuman, but now one could figure it out.”
“He still hasn’t eaten! He is hungry daddy, they need to feed him,” Ravi interrupted.
“Exactly! Too bad you weren’t there to help the gods figure that out Ravi,” Nihal said as he patted Ravi on the head. “Soon though Surya, the sun, realized the problem and brought three mangos to Hanuman. This pleased Vayu greatly and he returned to the earth. Wind flowed once more through the earth, rushing around bringing balance at last to the wilderness and peace to men. The next morning Hanuman awoke and are his mangos and Vayu carried him away.”
Nihal paused briefly noticing silence from Ravi he said “I will tell you more of this incredible story tomorrow son. Sleep tight, and have wonderful dreams of Hanuman. I love you.” He kissed his son and went of to his room to sleep.
Author’s Note:
I really enjoy the idea of writing a tale as a bedtime story. Putting a child to bed is the ideal situation to tell a wonderful imaginative story! It gives them entertainment, helps put them to sleep and maybe even gives them some really neat dreams! I thought that Hanuman would be the perfect story to tell to a child monkey. Just like a young boy wishes he could be superman, a young monkey must wish he could be Hanuman! With such incredible strength and the inability to be killed the young monkey’s look at him with adoration. The father Nihal used this opportunity to draw Ravi home. I know I’ve done similar things to get little boys to go to sleep! Simply asking them if they want to grow to be big and strong and telling them they need lots of rest will work! I used that in my story to show how much Ravi admired Hanuman. It was fun writing like a father telling the story to his child, and I barely changed any of the original story. I simplified some details and left out some more “violent” wording since it was a story being told to a child, but overall the story remained unchanged.
Bibliography:
1) Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.
“Ravi, do you know the wind you feel that cools you off on a hot day? That wind is the god Vayu. Vayu is Hanuman’s father, and his mother is the most beautiful monkey woman on all of earth Anjana. Anjana was already married, so she had to keep Hanuman a secret so she left him alone in a cave. All alone in the cave Hanuman began to grow hungry and started looking for something to eat. He gazed into the sky and saw a beautiful orange shape. ‘It must be a mango’ Hanuman thought, so he jumped towards it.”
“Daddy no, it’s the sun not a mango! Hanuman can’t get hurt!” Ravi exclaimed
“Don’t worry son he’ll be safe,” Nihal continued, “Vayu his father cooled Hanuman to keep him from getting burned up as he approached the sun! The Asura Rahu was approaching the sun to eat it causing a solar eclipse, and Hanuman accidently kicked him in the eye. Rahu fled to Indra, complaining that another Rahu was attempting to swallow the sun, so Indra got aboard his elephant Airavata and came to investigate. As Rahu approached Hanuman saw his large round form and once more attacked Rahu this time thinking he was a mango! Rahu yelled in pain and Indra shouted ‘Stop this at once!’ The noise of Indra’s shout diverted Hanuman’s attention and he caught sight of Airivata. ‘The biggest mango of all!’ thought Hanuman as he lept towards Airivata.
Ravi was laughing hysterically at the thought of Hanuman trying to eat so many things because he thought they were mangos. “Daddy, Hanuman is so silly,” Ravi said holding back his laughter. “What happens next? Indra doesn’t hurt Hanuman does he?”
Nihal chuckled at his sons amusement and continued the story, “Indra cast Hanuman down to earth with great force. Hanuman was hurt badly in the fall, and his father Vayu saw it all take place. The wind left the earth as Vayu went to the aid of his son Hanuman. The entire earth was without wind. Men grew restless, and climates changed in unnatural ways. The earth was out of balance with out Vayu flowing through the lands. Brahma came pleading for him to return to earth, and as a sign of goodwill he granted Hanuman invincibility. Still Vayu was not pleased. Something was still wrong with Hanuman, but now one could figure it out.”
“He still hasn’t eaten! He is hungry daddy, they need to feed him,” Ravi interrupted.
“Exactly! Too bad you weren’t there to help the gods figure that out Ravi,” Nihal said as he patted Ravi on the head. “Soon though Surya, the sun, realized the problem and brought three mangos to Hanuman. This pleased Vayu greatly and he returned to the earth. Wind flowed once more through the earth, rushing around bringing balance at last to the wilderness and peace to men. The next morning Hanuman awoke and are his mangos and Vayu carried him away.”
Nihal paused briefly noticing silence from Ravi he said “I will tell you more of this incredible story tomorrow son. Sleep tight, and have wonderful dreams of Hanuman. I love you.” He kissed his son and went of to his room to sleep.
Author’s Note:
I really enjoy the idea of writing a tale as a bedtime story. Putting a child to bed is the ideal situation to tell a wonderful imaginative story! It gives them entertainment, helps put them to sleep and maybe even gives them some really neat dreams! I thought that Hanuman would be the perfect story to tell to a child monkey. Just like a young boy wishes he could be superman, a young monkey must wish he could be Hanuman! With such incredible strength and the inability to be killed the young monkey’s look at him with adoration. The father Nihal used this opportunity to draw Ravi home. I know I’ve done similar things to get little boys to go to sleep! Simply asking them if they want to grow to be big and strong and telling them they need lots of rest will work! I used that in my story to show how much Ravi admired Hanuman. It was fun writing like a father telling the story to his child, and I barely changed any of the original story. I simplified some details and left out some more “violent” wording since it was a story being told to a child, but overall the story remained unchanged.
Bibliography:
1) Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.
Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI love that you made this a bedtime story! You are definitely right about this being the ideal situation to tell an imaginative story! I feel like this is definitely a good story to make into a bedtime story. I love the interruptions you add from Ravi. It shows how interesting and excited he is hearing this story about Hanuman from his dad. Great job!
This story was so cute! Bedtime stories are always such a nice way to simplify and add excitement to the story. I felt almost as if I were Ravi sitting in bed being told the story. I really enjoyed the way you used Ravi to interject the story and add personality. You made it very relatable, and fun to read. Good job!
ReplyDeleteHello Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI wrote my storytelling post of Hanuman's birth just like you did! I even told It as a bedtime story! We pretty much told the same story, however, in your story you added a bit more dialogue with Hanuman than I did. I enjoyed your story very much, and it is cool we picked the same type. Keep it up!
Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI loved this version of Hanuman’s origin. A lot of people wrote about this part of Buck’s Ramayana, but yours really stuck out to me. I think it was the dialogue and personality you gave to your characters that did it for me. I felt very connected to Ravi.
One thing, I think you might have been meaning to say ‘ate’ instead of ‘are’ in the last line of the second to last paragraph.
Great job! Really loved the story.